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Post by Louisebv on Sept 5, 2009 0:02:09 GMT -4
Please proofread your stories very carefully before submitting them. Make sure you you insert your commas and periods in your dialogues, like so.
"Hi Nick," Heath said as he passed his brother on the stairs.
"Well there you are, boy," Nick groused, fist on hips.
"I've been here all the time," Heath replied innocently. Then added, "What's up?"
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